Ninth in a series of posts that go through hymns in The Book of Praise of the Presbyterian Church of Canada.
Within your temple, Lord
Paraphrase, United Presbyterian Book of Psalms 1871
Music: Congregational Church Music 1853
Within your temple, Lord, your mercies we will tell,
for where your name is known there does your praise excel:
your praises sound through every land;
with righteous reign you shall command.Mount Zion, now rejoice! Let Judah’s daughters praise
with strong and cheerful voice, the justice God displays;
go round the walls on Zion’s mount
its many splendours to recount.
The towers of Zion tell; its palaces survey;
mark its defences well, and to your children say:
“The Lord, our faithful God and guide,
this God forever shall abide.”
The paraphrase is considerably shorter than the original Psalm and seems to leave out most of the more martial elements. Other than that, it fits nicely with the phrasing of the melody. If it were not the Lectionary Psalm of the day, I don’t think I would pick it for a service.
The tune for this hymn is ok. I’m not a huge fan, but it isn’t hard to sing and congregations will pick it up fairly quickly. I like the fact that the second half is not just more of the same. After two repeated lines there are two upward flowing phrases which lead to a nice climax.
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Eighth in a series of posts that go through hymns in The Book of Praise of the Presbyterian Church of Canada.
Oh send thy light forth
Paraphrase, Scottish Psalter 1650
Music: James Chalmers’ Collection, 1749
Oh send thy light forth and thy truth;
let them be guides to me,
and bring me to thine holy hill,
even where thy dwellings be.
Then to God’s altar I will go
to God, my chiefest joy;
O God, my God, to praise thy name
my harp I will employ.
Why art thou then cast down, my soul?
What should discourage thee?
And why with vexing thoughts art thou
disquieted in me?
Thou art my refuge and my help,
my God that doth me raise.
I hope in God; I will again
have cause to give thee praise.
The paraphrase is good. It skips over the first section of the Psalm and then follows quite closely for three verses without any strange syntax in order to achieve rhymes. The final verse is a combination of lines from the opening sequence of the Psalm and the last two lines.
The tune for this hymn is also a good one. I prefer it without the use of the half-notes at phrase endings. I believe they were put in to approximate the traditional practice of putting a fermata at the end of each phrase. I’m not sure about the half notes at the beginning of the phrases, they seem a bit gratuitous. Check out the rhythm in hymn 76 to see how much more nicely it flows.
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